Pitch - Sunshine Calling

It was suggested in the first pitch we change the name as The Trip is to obvious and cliche. Hannah came up with the idea of Sunshine Calling. This was because Yellow Sunshine is one of the street names for LSD. I thought this was a really good name and for the piece without giving away what the film is about.

In the feedback for the first pitch is was clear that we didn't have a clear structure so Alli has written this structure to use in the second pitch.

Also in this next pitch we added another slide about the characters and their profiles to help illustrate what they are going to be like. As our second pitch was to Mark who hasn't been shown anything yet we used Alli's tablets with the Pinterest board on so help him see what our piece will visually look like.